I really like how you had the question written but it also would have been interesting if you had someone asking the question. I like your idea of having yours be an interview on the phone. It’s creative. I like how you made it your own.
Dear Eden,
I like how you are talking on the phone, but I don’t really understand who you are talking to. You got into Mayella’s character really well. I also liked how you incorporated that her father died.
Eden
I like your monologue, I don’t know who you are talking to and who’s asking you the questions an I also really like how you said your responsible for Toms death and that you didn’t have the courage to say it was a lie on the stand.
The Buddy Buds 
I really like how you had the question written but it also would have been interesting if you had someone asking the question. I like your idea of having yours be an interview on the phone. It’s creative. I like how you made it your own.
-Kaitlyn
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Dear Eden,
I like how you are talking on the phone, but I don’t really understand who you are talking to. You got into Mayella’s character really well. I also liked how you incorporated that her father died.
-Luci
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Eden
I like your monologue, I don’t know who you are talking to and who’s asking you the questions an I also really like how you said your responsible for Toms death and that you didn’t have the courage to say it was a lie on the stand.
Isaiah
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