Interesting take on Dill’s personality. For the majority of the video, you kept the same tone of voice, and it made the video less interesting. Work on adding variety to your voice, but there were some great places when your tone changed, like when you were starting to talk about Scout.
It was an all around enjoyable and entertaining monologue. You focused on the camera too much. You were not supposed to make it seem like it’s in a video.
Great job overall. Interesting choice for taking on the character of Dill. It was in a very different point of view. I’d say for improvement you should not talk to the camera.
I really liked it but i thought you could of had a better camera angle so you could see your entire face and not off in the corner, but overall i liked it!
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Interesting take on Dill’s personality. For the majority of the video, you kept the same tone of voice, and it made the video less interesting. Work on adding variety to your voice, but there were some great places when your tone changed, like when you were starting to talk about Scout.
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It was an all around enjoyable and entertaining monologue. You focused on the camera too much. You were not supposed to make it seem like it’s in a video.
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Funny and creative! I like the “wrinkle the shirt” line!
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Great job overall. Interesting choice for taking on the character of Dill. It was in a very different point of view. I’d say for improvement you should not talk to the camera.
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Your acting made it very believable. Good Job!
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I really liked it but i thought you could of had a better camera angle so you could see your entire face and not off in the corner, but overall i liked it!
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